Black Curtain Call

Black Curtain Call an e-book published, copyright and written by Nikki Welton.

Plot: Ivy is a young woman facing her first lead roll performance when she overhears the young theater owner Cole telling the play director Marc that this will be the only performance because he was closing the theater to turn it into a Disco. Her long time close friend, she attempts to reason with him, but he is adamant. Meanwhile, Dwight who is Cole’s father and had been committed because his dementia had been worsening causing him to attack Cole with a knife, escapes by using a key with special properties. He comes to the theater and tells Marc he must use the key to escape to save the theater. The police arrive, apprehend and return Dwight to the institution but Marc does use the key to escape and takes Ivy, her older sister Grace and somehow Cole with him. They approach a black curtain, he uses the key and they enter Scotland in the era and as characters of the play Macbeth as depicted by Shakespeare. From here the play evolves on a sort of redo of the tale with Mark as Macbeth, Grace as his wife, Cole as King Duncan’s son Prince Malcom and Ivy as Princess Ingibiord his fiancée. After many harrowing activities here they manage to return but to a situation with an individual history of some of them quite different than formerly presented.

Discussion: The author’s Dedication appears to describe what the prospective reader may anticipate. “To all the crazy actors and theater lovers. To Macbeth and Duncan And to the cast and crew of Good Knight MacGyver (1991). This book would never exist without you.” Ivy is a scatterbrained young woman seemingly living a life that seems to be largely fanciful. Those individuals she has set forth in the dedication no doubt will really appreciate her efforts. For the casual fantasy reader, it may be an entirely different story. They may find a very confusing plot peopled with individuals with whom, for this reader at least, it was impossible to establish any empathy. Readers similar to myself, will find the one saving grace is the interesting and often amusing take on Shakespeare’s Macbeth, witches and all. A most difficult book upon which to render a conclusion. Those referenced no doubt will enjoy it immensely. However other readers who enjoy fantasy tales but discover such complete flights of fantasy difficult to accept, still may enjoy the unusual treatment of the story and characters of Shakespeare’s Macbeth.

3* Range 5* – 1* dependent upon reader’s attitude.

The Divine Dream

The Divine Dream, published, copyright (2013) and written by Christopher Schmitt.

High school student Apollo Mayal is easily bored by his classes and not a particularly good student. Yet his stated desire is to be “the type of scientist that will even put the great Einstein, Bell, Bohr, and Tesla to shame. I would like to invent crazy things, to discover cures for diseases people never heard of, to be a man everyone can rely on.” He accidentally falls in class and is declared to be officially dead although he seems, in his own perception, to be alive and in a place of magnificently beautiful and peaceful scenery. Here he meets a British soldier of the American Revolution who is with an American patriot of the same time. They inform him that actually he is not dead, but actually within his soul and he was snagged at just the right time. They tell him that they need his help as they are spirits and there is trouble in Purgatory which is practically empty – the millions of people who die every year move first into this area and now have disappeared. They are confident that he is the person who can help because the monstrosity responsible for this is the CEO of a very prominent corporation still alive as is Apollo. So they instruct him on the rules of Purgatory, about his soul and his spirit. He will help them because they are going to help him become a topnotch scientist. They explain it may take 2 – 3 years but don’t worry because time travels slower in an individual’s soul than on earth, so probably it will take no more than 3 – 4 earth days. Further, that his body will be ‘shut-off’ while his spirit is away – soul and spirt are two different things. Spirit is like a shadow to the physical body, lives in special area people can’t see (Purgatory) and the physical body needs the spirit to live, but at the same time the body needs the spirit to die. From this point forward the author moves even further into a highly imaginative, convoluted fantasy that this reviewer most regrettably found to be largely confusing at best, if not incomprehensible.

Discussion: The first portion of this book, as stated was confusing at least for this reader, in attempting to establish a perspective. Further, it continued for some time until realization belatedly arrived that this strange and complex compilation of activities was a dream sequence. Not too astute, obviously. However, the late recognition resulted from expecting a sleep/dream sequence (apropos the title) and not associating the blow to the head suffered by Apollo’s causing loss of consciousness during which the series of weird activities that only dreams could sequence ‘kicked-in’. An additional problem encountered was expectation of the book’s content from interpretation of its synopsis. Specifically, the book led this reader to expect a discussion of religion(s) – “Apollo must discover the connection between an American corporation and the lost souls. As Apollo investigates existence itself, a shocking conspiracy surrounding the world’s religions goes deeper, threatening everything he thought he knew.” Granted, the story presented certainly does provide a decidedly ‘different’ approach to religion, but the “shocking conspiracy” seems a little misleading. It also impresses me with the necessity for at least perusing the author’s biography before committing to read someone’s book. The biography reads in part: “Chris loves fiction of any type, the crazier the better.” Perhaps adding even further to the book’s intent are the pertinence of the author’s closing words in the Epilogue: “Tesla, anyone’s dream can come true, but it is the way of obtaining it that makes us who we are.”

Conclusion: This reviewer’s apologies for obvious misinterpretation of the presumed basic tenets of the author’s book. Regrettably however, although having reviewed many books in the fantasy genre, this one is difficult to classify. I suggest that perhaps a 2* rating may be appropriate for some fantasy devotees with a gradual increase as the fantasy devotee approaches the higher end of fantasy acceptance.

2* with gradual rating increase as higher end of fantasy acceptance is approached.